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Fast feet
Running
Chased
By immensity
Stop
Drop
Roll
Still feet
Consumed by smoke
Doubled over
Hacking
Until tomorrow
When it clears
And she learns
It was simply morning fog
And her shadow
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“chased by immensity” is such a cool bit. Great piece.
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shadows!!! Ack . . . can’t get rid of ’em 🙂
Nope. They always catch up with us!
Love the rhythm of this — short and quick with “fast feet”, then slowed down with “still feet” as you get more contemplative. Beautiful writing.
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Whew, just a bad dream.